Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Tooth Trouble

Today some of Mrs. Caldwell's Senior Kindergartens joined us on Skype to work together on this shared writing.  First, we read "But Then", a poem by Aileen Fisher.  Next, we thought of our ideas about losing a tooth.  Then we started writing our ideas in a poem.  There were rhyming words in But Then, so we tried using some rhyming too.  Our classes decided together to change some parts of the poem to make them rhyme and to make them sound better.  Here's what we came up with:

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